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November 14, 2004

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Javier Garcia

This essay provides an excellent extensive view into the thought of child Asian characters in American literature. The Essay’s introduction of Lucy Fitch Perkin’s background presents the start of an easy to read progression of events. The reader’s thesis seems to summarize as… ‘Lucy Finch Perkin’s series The Twins of the World, specifically the Chinese, Japanese and Filipino novels, were very important to contemporary American Literature, because her depiction of Asian children gave insight as to how other cultures around the world differed from that of the United States in the early Twentieth Century.’

Within each section was a well displayed history and synopsis of each set of twin’s culture and story. More interesting in each section was how the author was able to parallel the stories with that of the situation of those in the United States. Often in each comparison, the reader was able to identify with the major American icons such as Theodore Roosevelt or the booming U.S. 1920’s, which helped in keeping interesting within the context of the culture/ story. Further compelling were the comparison of novels within each Asian culture, which displayed a deeper and more lifelike view of each culture.

Furthurmore the essay introduces the reader to a larger question of ‘How do Asian children differ from our own American childhoods, and how has the information in this series of novels change the way contemporary novels of similar topics are written and read?’ Obviously the creation of these underlying questions, mean this essay has brought new insight and intrigue to the reader.

With few, if any mechanical or grammatical errors this essay could only leave the reader with few questions to ask. Primarily I would have liked more of a transition into how/ why you are comparing the Asian cultures to American Culture. This could perhaps be mended if the introduction gave some foreshadowing to these particular parts in the paper? The comparison sections also began abruptly and perhaps could use a transition or foreshadowing as mentioned. Other questions I wondered were, why doesn’t the essay list the cultures in Chronological order? Is there meaning in this particular order? Were there other novels that could have been compared to each particular culture? Why did you pick these specifically? What happened to Lucy Finch Perkins? And are there any reviews or other American reaction to these pieces of literature that could be added to the essay? The inclusion of reviews or other insight may provide a more personal style rather then the current authoritative style. Nevertheless, in entirety the writer’s details help to peak the reader’s interest, and the insightful topic drives the curiosity within and after the paper.

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